The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999
This
line chart depicts the percentage of unemployed in two countries: the US and
Japan
from
March
1993 to
March
1999. It is clear from the graph that the ratio decreased in the US and increased in
Japan
.
According to
what is shown, the US went down respectively from 7% in
March
1993 to nearly 4.1% in
March
1999. As we can see the ratio decreased by around 2.9% in six years.
Japan
,
on the other hand
, climbed gradually from 2.4% in
March
1993 to almost 4.7% in
March
1999.
To sum up
, we could say that, in the US the ratio has dropped and in
Japan
is sour.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unemployment rate
  • Trend
  • Comparison
  • Period
  • Sharp increase/decrease
  • Correlation
  • Economic policies
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic conditions
  • Consumer spending
  • Social welfare
  • Public sentiment
  • Predictions
  • Economic strategies
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