U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph describes the fuel usage and the estimated
energy
consumption in the USA between 1980 and 2030.
Overall
, it is clear that
fossil fuel has a virtual monopoly and will be continue
Change the verb form
continue
to
the future with petroleum being always the highest. Change preposition
in
Whereas
, Correct word choice
apply
renewable
Capitalize word
Renewable
energy
resources
have changed frequently with
remaining stable lower, Change preposition
while
although
nuclear and solar/wind resources
are set to be small rises in ending of the 50
years.
Petrol and oil commanded the largest value in 35 quadrillion units (35q) in 1980. There was a fluctuation during the first two decades, Correct word choice
next 50
nevertheless
petroleum Add a comma
,nevertheless
energy
is expected to hit a
highest point at 50q in 2030. Change the word
its
In the same fashion
, coal and natural gas have been fluctuated
climbing and coal surpassed natural gas by 2015. Those two Change to the active voice
fluctuated
resources
are predicted to increase in
35q and 25q each by 2030.
In terms of renewable Change preposition
by
energy
, all resources
fluctuated modestly approximately 5q for the first 30 recorded years, before experiencing a period of stability. By endpoints, nuclear and solar/wind are forecasted to somewhat growth
in 8q and 6q respectively with hydropower being stagnant onwards.Replace the word
grow
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, resources, q with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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