U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1 You should spend 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

U.S. Energy Consumption - Task 1

You should spend 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows U.S. Energy Consumption by Fuel (1980-2030).

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph describes the fuel usage and the estimated
energy
consumption in the USA between 1980 and 2030.
Overall
,
it is clear that
fossil fuel has a virtual monopoly and will
be continue
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to
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in
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the future with petroleum being always the highest.
Whereas
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apply
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,
renewable
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Renewable
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energy
resources
have changed frequently
with
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while
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remaining stable lower,
although
nuclear and solar/wind
resources
are set to be small rises in ending of the
50
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years. Petrol and oil commanded the largest value in 35 quadrillion units (35q) in 1980. There was a fluctuation during the first two decades,
nevertheless
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petroleum
energy
is expected to hit
a
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its
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highest point at 50q in 2030.
In the same fashion
, coal and natural gas have
been fluctuated
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climbing and coal surpassed natural gas by 2015. Those two
resources
are predicted to increase
in
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by
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35q and 25q each by 2030. In terms of renewable
energy
, all
resources
fluctuated modestly approximately 5q for the first 30 recorded years, before experiencing a period of stability. By endpoints, nuclear and solar/wind are forecasted to somewhat
growth
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grow
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in 8q and 6q respectively with hydropower being stagnant onwards.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, resources, q with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • fuel sources
  • petroleum
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • renewable energy
  • hydroelectric
  • solar
  • wind
  • fossil fuels
  • upward trend
  • fluctuations
  • nuclear energy
  • steady increase
  • environmental concerns
  • technological advancements
  • projections
  • reliant
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