The charts below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range of the years 1990 and 2010.

The charts below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range of the years 1990 and 2010.
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The provided chart presents data concerning the proportion of individuals from the United Kingdom who made charitable donations across different age groups in the years 1990 and 2010.
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, what stands out from the graph is that older British people provided considerably more financial assistance to those in need in both years. If we look at the ages between 36-50 and 51-65 it’s visible that these categories are significantly outnumbered and 36-50 reached 43% which is the highest. Despite the highest percentage of charity in 1990 it declined to 35% in 2010. As regards more young generation between 18-25 has the lowest percentage.
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they were over 15% in 1990 after 2 decades they plummeted to 7%. Meanwhile between 26-35 parts of the citizens Contributed “doubled financially to humanitarian causes than 18-25 in 1990 reaching up to 30%, despite the fact in 2010 decreased to 24%. For 65 years the oldest generation of the United Kingdom gave funds for charitable over 3% more than in 1990.
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