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Given are two graphs concerning the use of the
internet
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Internet
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 in Europe.
While
 the first table reveals the figures for
internet
 clients in various European countries in 1995, 2000, and 2004, measured in
million
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millions
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, the second pie chart indicates the popularity of online purchases in those nations.
Overall
, there was an upward trend witnessed in the number of
internet
 users in every country researched, with the most significant changes
belonged
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 to that of the UK. Meanwhile, an overwhelming majority of online shopping was accounted for by France. In terms of the table, the number of people using the
Internet
 in the UK was higher than any other figure. Starting at 16
million
 in 1995, it
then
 rose dramatically and maintained its crown at 41
million
 in 2004. In sharp contrast,
that
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of
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Germany
also
 experienced a drastic increase from 5
million
 in 1995 to 314
million
 after a 5-year period, which was
also
 its peak, before dropping exponentially to 15
million
at the end
 of the period.
On the other hand
, France, Switzerland, and Spain shared the relatively same progressive trend. Initiated at 2, 1, and 0.5, they
then
 climbed steadily to 6, 4, and 2 after 9 years, respectively. With regard to the pie chart, France took up the first rank of online sales with around 48%, closely followed by
Swizerland
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Switzerland
 with merely 30%. The least significant proportion was constituted by Germany, at roughly 13%.
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