it is neither posible nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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university

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and get a degree. Some

people

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argue that it is not practical nor beneficial for all young

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to get higher

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university

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. I totally agree with

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opinion and believe

universities

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are not meant for everybody.

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, forcing

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to go to

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university

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affects both the person's life and the

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system in a negative way.

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simply doesn't like to be forced to do anything and

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includes going to

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and spending hundreds of hours

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what they might not even like.

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getting higher

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increases the chance of

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finding a job, not everybody is a science person and

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, spending

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in a

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instead

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of actually learning the job they want would be a

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of

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.

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, my friend Mohamad always wanted to become a successful salesman. Even though he got accepted

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one

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of the best

universities

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my country, he quit his studies to

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pursue

his dreams and

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his

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at the

university

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as a

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of his

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. So,

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should not be forced by their parents or employers to reach higher degrees of

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their will and

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, they should spend their

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pursuing what might actually be useful for their future.

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,

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the lack of enough empty seats in our

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, only

people

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who really want to

study

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should attend

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. There are a lot of

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people

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who's

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dream is to become a scientist or a professor but they are unable to do that because their seats are already occupied by those who don't even want to

study

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.

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semester I attended a class in my

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where more than 70% of the

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who were signed up were absent and it really hurt the environment

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it was a

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of resources.

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, I believe it is better to only accept those who are enthusiastic about learning in our

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instead

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of those who will only skip the classes and barely even pass the exams.

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, to answer the question of whether or not to provide a large proportion of

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with a chance for higher

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and examine the possibility of it, we have to consider the harm it does to both ends. On

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side, forcing

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to

study

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against their desire will only

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their

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and prevent them from becoming what they wish for.

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, we have to optimize our use of educational resources and select only the

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who's

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dream is to

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more and

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maybe

become a scientist

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day because we don't have enough capacity for all the young

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in our

universities

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.