The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs.
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The pie charts provide information about the outcome of research as far as youngsters are concerned. The first and second graph provides data showing cultural and free time activities participated by males and females respectively. The unit is measured in percentage
Overall
, the vast majority of boys spent their free time on computer
games
while
few of them were interested in reading. In addition
, a significant number of females enjoyed dancing in their leisure time as compared to listening to music.
With regard to boys, 34% of them were interested in computer
games
. This
figure was the highest as opposed to other exercises. Basketball ball took the second position with 26%. Listening to music as well as
skateboarding had quite similar percentages with 10% and 11% respectively while
few of them enjoyed reading with 2%.
By contrast
, most ladies developed the habit of dancing and reading with 27% and 21% respectively. In addition
, although
, females participated in computer
games
,however
, males liked more computer
games
than girls with an 18% difference. Netball as well as
listening to music recorded 15% and 10% respectively.Submitted by boadimaxwell48 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, games with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "provide" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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