The chart below g/vas information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main loaturos, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below g/vas information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main loaturos, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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chart gives data about spending
money
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by families who get a weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
Overall
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, there are eight types of sources that are used to spend their
money
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namely food, housing, fuel and power, clothing and footwear, household
goods
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, personal
goods
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, transport and leisure from 50 years.
To begin
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with , in 1968 a large amount was spent by families than in 2018. Remarkably, they spent a higher amount of
money
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on food around 35 per
cent
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in 1968.
However
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, it was reduced in 2018 by more than 15 per
cent
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.
Moreover
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, there are not any household
goods
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in 50 years.
Also
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, in 1968 equal amount of
money
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was spent by families on housing, clothing and footwear.
Also
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, in 2018 equal
money
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used for personal
goods
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, fuel and power in lower than 5 per
cent
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. Typically, they are spending
money
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approximately 15 to 20 per
cent
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on food and housing in 2018.
Moreover
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, around 5 to 10 per
cent
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in 1968.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, goods, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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