WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below g/vas information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main loaturos, and make comparisons where relevant.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below g/vas information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main loaturos, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
chart gives data about spending
money
by families who get a weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
Overall
, there are eight types of sources that are used to spend their
money
namely food, housing, fuel and power, clothing and footwear, household
goods
, personal
goods
, transport and leisure from 50 years.
To begin
with , in 1968 a large amount was spent by families than in 2018. Remarkably, they spent a higher amount of
money
on food around 35 per
cent
in 1968.
However
, it was reduced in 2018 by more than 15 per
cent
.
Moreover
, there are not any household
goods
in 50 years.
Also
, in 1968 equal amount of
money
was spent by families on housing, clothing and footwear.
Also
, in 2018 equal
money
used for personal
goods
, fuel and power in lower than 5 per
cent
. Typically, they are spending
money
approximately 15 to 20 per
cent
on food and housing in 2018.
Moreover
, around 5 to 10 per
cent
in 1968.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, moreover".
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, goods, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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