The chart above shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
This
bar chart depicts the figures of males and females in higher education in Britain in three spans, and whether they were studying full-time or part-time.
According to
what is shown, there were one million part-time, while
full-time was around one hundred thousand
in 1970/71. Furthermore
, in 1980/81 was slightly less than 1970/71 part-time, however
, full-time was progressive to nearly two hundred thousand
. In 1990/91 part-time grew again to nine hundred thousand
, while
full-time was increased over than two hundred thousand
.
Women, on the other hand
, were 760,000 part-time, while
full-time was 70,000. Whereas
, in 1980/81 women climbed in both sections. Next period in 1990/91 females significantly increased part-time and modestly increased full-time.
To sum up
, we could say that, part-time education was the most common at all times in both genders men and women.Submitted by Aziz
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