The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
These pie charts show the amount of
water
that was used for distinct aims in six different regions Use synonyms
in
the world. Change preposition
of
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
agricultural Linking Words
use
of Use synonyms
water
was dominant in most of the areas. Use synonyms
While
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water
used for domestic Use synonyms
purpose
seems to account for less than others. Looking at the charts more closely, one can see that in North America and Europe, Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
water
for industrial Use synonyms
use
represented around 50%; 48% and 53 Use synonyms
percent
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relatively
. The second importance in order of two these regions was agricultural Rephrase
respectively
use
and domestic Use synonyms
use
wasn’t noticed much. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the rest of Linking Words
areas
invented Correct article usage
the areas
water
mostly into agriculture up to the highest point Use synonyms
88
Change preposition
of 88
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percent
in Central Asia. The amount of Change the spelling
per cent
water
used for Use synonyms
industry
was more than domestically in South East Asia Add an article
the industry
while
three other areas used Linking Words
water
in larger quantity domestically than for industry including South America, 19 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
percent
compared to 10%, Africa 9 Change the spelling
per cent
Use synonyms
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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