The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
These pie charts show the amount of
water
that was used for distinct aims in six different regions in
the world. Change preposition
of
Overall
, it is clear that
agricultural use
of water
was dominant in most of the areas. While
water
used for domestic purpose
seems to account for less than others. Looking at the charts more closely, one can see that in North America and Europe, Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
water
for industrial use
represented around 50%; 48% and 53 percent
relatively
. The second importance in order of two these regions was agricultural Rephrase
respectively
use
and domestic use
wasn’t noticed much. In contrast
, the rest of areas
invented Correct article usage
the areas
water
mostly into agriculture up to the highest point 88
Change preposition
of 88
percent
in Central Asia. The amount of Change the spelling
per cent
water
used for industry
was more than domestically in South East Asia Add an article
the industry
while
three other areas used water
in larger quantity domestically than for industry including South America, 19 percent
compared to 10%, Africa 9 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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