You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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These pie charts demonstrate to what portion of the
electricity
each source
of power
contributed in two
categories of all types and renewables
. There are two
charts shown for Germany
and two
for France both of which relate to 2009.
In Germany
, conventional thermal amounted for
almost 60% of the total Change preposition
to
power
. Furthermore
, nuclear was responsible for a bit over a fifth of the total energy and lastly
, renewables
are the source
of a little below a fifth of the total electricity
. Moreover
, biomass and wind, combined contributed over two thirds
of Add a hyphen
two-thirds
renewables
with equal portions and the rest is provided by hydroelectric and solar energies.
On the other hand
, nuclear power
provided
more than Wrong verb form
provides
three quarters
of the total Add a hyphen
three-quarters
electricity
. Also
, renewable energies were held accountable for almost 13% of the whole electricity
while
conventional thermal only produced 10% of the power
. However
, hydroelectric produced nearly four fifth
of the total renewable Add a hyphen
four-fifth
power
while
wind, biomass and solar contributed way less than that. Although
geothermal power
is mentioned, it contributes almost nothing to the total power
whatsoever.
Even though both countries use renewables
for only about a fifth of their total electricity
, France relied heavily on nuclear power
. Instead
, conventional thermal was the most prevalent source
of energy in Germany
. Also
among the renewable sources, hydroelectric was the dominating source
in France while
biomass and wind were the ones with the most participation in renewables
in Germany
.Submitted by a.ansari3103 on
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