You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The vertical bar chart depicts information, in percentage during the period from 1995 until 2010, about Australian citizens and people not born in AUS regarding choices of housing in urban, rural
areas
and cities. Looking from an
overall
perspective, 40% of born Australians preferred to live in cities in 1995.
On the contrary
, a similar percentage of foreigners who live in Australia choose to settle down in rural
areas
.
Furthermore
, the 2010 year presented significant changes in the matter.
In addition
, people born in Australia equally choose to reside in either towns or rural
areas
, with just over 15% opposing the scenario in 1995. Meanwhile, 80% of people not born in Australia massively choose to stay in towns, an increase of 20% in comparison to 1995.
Finally
, AUS citizens considerably changed their preference regarding living in the city or rural
areas
during the 15-year period.
Similarly
, behave the foreigns in the same matter.
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