The graph below shows the amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002.
The line graph demonstrates the weight of
items
delivered in the United Kingdom between 1974 and 2002 and the ways of their delivery, namely, roads, water, Use synonyms
pipelines
and Use synonyms
rails
.
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rail
Overall
, as it is illustrated there was a slight fluctuation with an upward trend in the amount of goods that were transported via road and Linking Words
this
kind of delivery was the most popular among others, Linking Words
whereas
the smallest quantity of different Linking Words
items
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were
delivered using Change the verb form
was
pipelines
in the UK from 1974 to 2009.
Between 1974 and 1978 figures that showed the situation with things transported by ships and trains equalized and accounted for 40 Use synonyms
million
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tones
, Correct your spelling
tonnes
however
, from 1978 and by the end of the period there were different patterns, which made up approximately 61 Linking Words
million
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tones
and 41 Correct your spelling
tonnes
million
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tones
, respectively. Correct your spelling
tonnes
Initially
, the number of cargoes that Linking Words
were
distributed by roads constituted about 70 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
million
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tones
, which was 30 Use synonyms
million
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tones
more than the amount of those that were shipped and Use synonyms
items
that went along the rail tracks, Use synonyms
although
, in 1994 there was a rapid increase in Linking Words
million
tonnes of products delivered by lorries , which made up almost 100 Use synonyms
million
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tones
by the end of the observed timeline.
At the beginning of the Use synonyms
period
there were no goods transported by Add a comma
,period
pipelines
, Use synonyms
however
, in 1978 the number of Linking Words
items
distributed by Use synonyms
pipelines
rose rapidly, accounting for about 18 Use synonyms
million
tonnes, which was approximately a quarter of goods delivered by camion. By the end of the observed period, the data that demonstrated things transported by special channels had climbed slightly and constituted just over 20 Use synonyms
million
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tones
, which was an insignificant number compared to other categories.Correct your spelling
tonnes
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