The charts below show the percentage of monthly household income spent on various items by two different groups in one European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts illustrate what percentage of their income two different groups spent on activities and things.

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while

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the low-income

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spent most of their money on food and drinks, the high-income

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spent the highest percentage of their income on miscellaneous.

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, communities who earn less spend 29% of their income on food and drink,

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rich individuals spend only 15% on

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category. Meanwhile, people who earn more money spend 21% of their salary on recreation and culture

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the other category spends just 11%.

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the high-income class spend 12% of their earnings on restaurants and hotels, the crowd who earn less spend the least amount of payment on these activities, 4%.

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, both categories spent about the same bill on clothing, 5% and 6%.

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, they spent similar percentages on miscellaneous, for the high-livelihood

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representing 18% of their earnings and for low low-cash

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representing 23%. A big difference is made by fuel bills.

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for individuals who earn more money bills consume only 7% of their salary, for low-income communities

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category consumes 24% of their salaries.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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