You recently went to a restaurant but think you could have left your credit card behind. Write to the restaurant. In your letter Tell them when you went there Describe where you think you may have left the credit card Explain what you would like the restaurant to do

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Dear Sir I am Vy, and I am your customer. First of all, I would like to thank your restaurant for making delicious

food

and having a nice view to enjoy dinner with my family. Unfortunately,

last

week, when I went to your restaurant to eat out, I thought that I left my credit

card

on your table when I made a payment. I would like to provide some traits for my credit

card

as well as

some feedback on the foods below. For the credit

card

firstly

, It is a blue

card

, which has my full name and my birthday on the front.

Secondly

, It was generated by ACB company,

This

card

is provided with the date it was activated and expired on the behind

this

card

. It left on the number of table is 43. For the

food

, we would like to give some feedback because it tasted very good, especially Italian

food

. I love your pizza because it is made by a well-known chef.

However

, the noodles are not good, because it has a bit salty and bitter. Hopefully, you can consider that to improve your

food

as your services. Kindly respond to me as soon as possible if you have found

this

card

, I would appreciate it if either you or your team help me to find

this

card

. If you have any

further

about the

card

information, feel free to ask me any questions. Thanks and regards Vy Nguyen

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

244 words

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