Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more homes. Should these new homes be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside
It is indeed true that many
countries
Change noun form
countries'
country's
population
Fix the agreement mistake
populations
has become increased
Wrong verb form
have increasing
day
by day
and more houses needed
for their living. It is argued that Add a missing verb
are needed
people
should build more building
in Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
city
for their housing Add an article
the city
while
others believe that the countryside
is best for building new houses. In this
essay
I will discuss it from my own view.
Add a comma
,essay
To begin
with, building new houses in city
Add an article
the city
have
a lot of advancement. The crucial facility is available in Correct subject-verb agreement
has
city
notably, hospital School transport system and Correct article usage
the city
also
many thing which is very difficult to find anywhere. It is assistive them
to live a good life but a Change preposition
for them
city
is already overpopulated and there have some problems already facing the local people
. For example
, in cities major
problem is traffic Add an article
the major
jam
and pollution which is already a big problem for native Fix the agreement mistake
jams
people
. If we tries
to build Change the verb form
try
new
building on their each will Add an article
a new
be
affect Unnecessary verb
apply
for
local Change preposition
apply
residence
.
Replace the word
residents
On the other hand
, build
up Wrong verb form
building
building
in the Replace the word
buildings
countryside
for more residence
, Replace the word
residents
it
will help to create more Correct pronoun usage
apply
opportunity
for Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
people
. It is
not only helps to create new jobs but Unnecessary verb
apply
also
helps to enhance the communication system. The government will develop that site automatically when people
will build new building
in the Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
countryside
. For example
, in Bangladesh, Dhaka city
is overpopulated, day
by day
new residency has created for new people
but if people
tries
to build their residence in other Change the verb form
try
City
then
the population can be reduce
from Change the verb form
be reduced
big
Add an article
the big
a big
city
and new opportunity would create on
those cities.
Change preposition
in
To conclude
, it is true that city
life is good which is very difficult to find anywhere but if we didn't create any alternative residency for people
then
cities people
can be affected
Wrong verb form
affect
for
their Change preposition
apply
live
. We should create new Replace the word
lives
residency
in the Fix the agreement mistake
residences
countryside
so that we can create new opportunities for new people
.Submitted by muhammadnaim194196 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?