Many countries are experiencing population growth and need more homes. Should these new homes be constructed in existing cities or should new towns be built in the countryside

It is indeed true that many

countries

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population

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populations

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has become increased

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day

by

day

and more houses

needed

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for their living. It is argued that

people

should build more

building

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in

city

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the city

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for their housing

while

others believe that the

countryside

is best for building new houses. In

this

essay

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I will discuss it from my own view.

To begin

with, building new houses in

city

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have

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a lot of advancement. The crucial facility is available in

city

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notably, hospital School transport system and

also

many thing which is very difficult to find anywhere. It is assistive

them

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to live a good life but a

city

is already overpopulated and there have some problems already facing the local

people

.

For example

, in cities

major

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problem is traffic

jam

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and pollution which is already a big problem for native

people

. If we

tries

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to build

new

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building on their each will

be

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affect

for

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local

residence

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residents

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.

On the other hand

,

build

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up

building

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in the

countryside

for more

residence

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residents

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,

it

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apply

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will help to create more

opportunity

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opportunities

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for

people

. It

is

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not only helps to create new jobs but

also

helps to enhance the communication system. The government will develop that site automatically when

people

will build new

building

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buildings

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in the

countryside

.

For example

, in Bangladesh, Dhaka

city

is overpopulated,

day

by

day

new residency has created for new

people

but if

people

tries

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to build their residence in other

City

then

the population can

be reduce

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from

big

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the big

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city

and new opportunity would create

on

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those cities.

To conclude

, it is true that

city

life is good which is very difficult to find anywhere but if we didn't create any alternative residency for

people

then

cities

people

can be

affected

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affect

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for

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their

live

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. We should create new

residency

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residences

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in the

countryside

so that we can create new opportunities for new

people

.