The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female executives in six different types of profession across the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female executives in six different types of profession across the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female executives in six different types of profession across the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
The bar chart depicts the proportion of six different professions based on gender in the UK in 2007. The figures are presented in percentages.
Overall
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, we can see that some professions were exclusively popular among female workers
such
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as teaching, being a therapist and advertising.
In contrast
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, male-based professions included law, construction, and scientists. Looking at the data in more detail, in 2007, women dominated men in teaching, with about 90% of teachers being female, as opposed to only 10% of male teachers.
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, more than 80% of therapists were women.
In contrast
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,
males
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accounted for less than a fifth of professional therapists. In the advertising industry,
females
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and
males
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accounted for 55% and 45% respectively.
On the other hand
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,
males
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dominated
females
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in jobs like construction with the majority of workers being
males
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, which stood at 90%, as opposed to 10% of
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. There were 60% male scientists in the UK in 2007,
while
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female scientists comprised 40% of the total. The
last
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male-dominated job was law,
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and
females
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accounted for 55% and 45% respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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