The pie chart displays the major causes of global land degradation, while the table illustrates how three regions of the world were affected by those causes during the 1990's.

The pie chart displays the major causes of global land degradation, while the table illustrates how three regions of the world were affected by those causes during the 1990's.
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, over-grazing , deforestation , and over-cultivation are the main reasons why agricultural countryside worldwide is
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degraded
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. Europe had
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higher percentage of
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area than Oceania and North America. Over-grazing, which
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accounts
for 35% of the world's
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farmland, is the single biggest reason for
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global field degradation .
Deforeststion
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and Over-cultivation constitute another 30% and 28% respectively. Of the three regions, Europe had the greatest proportion of
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during the
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at 23% .
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,there, the biggest factor was not over-grazing but deforestation, which caused 9.8% of the ground to become less productive. Oceania was
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the
second most affected region, with a total of 13% of
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, and
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was mostly caused by Over-grazing at 11.3%. It's
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that Oceania didn't Over-cultivation its continent in comparison,only a total of 5% of the beach in North America was
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and Over
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%, was the biggest cause.
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