The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients,all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients,all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients,all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate the proportions of
three
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types of components in four certain meals, which could be risky to health if
consum
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consumed
too much.
Overall
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, breakfast contains the least percentage of the
three
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nutrients compared to others, and dinner and snacks look less healthy
due to
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higher
proporations
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proportions
proportion
of
sodium
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and saturated fat and added
sugar
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respectively. It's noticeable that in all
three
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components, breakfast is the most balancing meal in
comparision
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comparison
with others and has the lowest ratios which are 14%
of
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apply
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sodium
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and 16%
of
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apply
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saturated fat and added
sugar
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.
Furthermore
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, lunch is
also
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relatively balanced in the
three
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components. Dinner is probably the most risky meal
in
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of
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the four meals, which
contain
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contains
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43% of
sodium
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and 37% of saturated fat. Despite
this
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,
although
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snacks have low proportions of
sodium
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and saturated fat,
it
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they
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contain 42%
of
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apply
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added
sugar
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that
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which
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is less
familier
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familiar
to people who have
problem
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problems
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with
sugar
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, sodium, sugar with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • typical meals
  • percentages
  • saturated fats
  • fibers
  • sugars
  • impact
  • average
  • consumption
  • trends
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • implications
  • balanced diet
  • recommendations
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