he diagrams below give information about the Eiffel Tower in Paris and an outline project to extend it underground. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown.
The picture indicates some information about the Eiffel
Tower
in Paris and an outline plan to lengthen it under the tower
. This
essay is going to note some significant features and compare them when necessary.
Overall
, there is a map of where the Eiffel Tower
is located, a detailed drawing of the tower
from the front perspective, and details about the specifications, above and under the ground.
To start with, the Eiffel Tower
is positioned in Paris near the Ecole Militaire. It is built on the side of the River Seine and on the west side of the Hotel des Invalides. There are two other well-known buildings that exist on the side of it, such
as the Musee du Louvre and the Musee d'Orsay.
Moreover
, the towering, skyscraping structure stands 324 meters tall, weighing about 10,100 tonnes, due to
the metal material. In addition
, there are two viewing platforms for people to visit, the first and second platform is 57 and 115 meters above the ground, respectively. Also
, it is planned to have five levels of underground facilities and a lift to make mobilization faster.Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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