The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the data about how
families
in one country spent their weekly income in 2 different years, in 1968 and in 2018.
Overall
, there were fluctuated in the figures for each, it is noticeable that food was the most common in families
' spending while
the need for fuel and power was the least.
In 1986, food was the most spending things
that Fix the agreement mistake
thing
families
afford, it took 35%, clothing
, Correct word choice
and clothing
footware
and housing took 10% Correct your spelling
footwear
in
Change preposition
of
families
spending. Fix the agreement mistake
family
Suprisingly
, either housing or personal goods, transport and leisure have approximately figures, about 8% each, fuel and power were the least things that Correct your spelling
Surprisingly
families
afford to buy, with only 6%.
There were a lot of changes in the percentages of spending from families
in 2018. Unexpectedly, leisure ranked first in families
spending, with 22%, followed by housing with 19%, food was lower than Fix the agreement mistake
family
Correct your spelling
housing at
housing
housingat
2%, transport with 14% and household goods still maintained the same data after Correct your spelling
housing at
long
time, the others facilities Change the article
a long
such
as clothing and footware
, personal goods, fuel and power, those have the figures which were lower than 5%Correct your spelling
footwear
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