The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the data about the
hours
of teaching per year done by each teacher in 4 different nations in the year 2001, including
Japan
, Spain, Iceland, and America, with different education, which are primary, secondary, and upper secondary.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the United States was outstanding with the highest figures compared to other countries. Meanwhile,
Japan
was completely opposite with the least
hours
of teaching.
Japan
, the country with the least
hours
of teaching, have 600
hours
of individual teaching per year in both primary and secondary education,
in
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upper secondary has a peak than the 2 previous which
approximately
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610
hours
of teaching. In Spain, the figures for primary and secondary were the same as in
Japan
, for the upper secondary, the data was reached
to
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1000
hours
, which surprisingly higher compared to the other educations. In Iceland, the
hours
that teacher taught in
primary
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category was the same
to
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Japan
and Spain, secondary and upper secondary received the same figures which 800
hours
each.
Last
but not least, the USA have the highest figure, which shows the amount of time that each teacher teaches was enormous, primary education
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about 820
hours
,
while
secondary and upper secondary have over 1000
hours
, in more detail, secondary have 1050
hours
and upper secondary have 1100
hours
.
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  • annual hours of teaching
  • teaching workload
  • educational systems
  • teacher-student ratio
  • significantly
  • slightly
  • noticeably
  • gap
  • highest/lowest number of hours
  • compare
  • contrast
  • reflect
  • variations
  • distribution of teaching hours
  • average
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