The graph below shows the hours of teaching per year done by each teacher in four different countries in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the data about the
hours
of teaching per year done by each teacher in 4 different nations in the year 2001, including Japan
, Spain, Iceland, and America, with different education, which are primary, secondary, and upper secondary.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the United States was outstanding with the highest figures compared to other countries. Meanwhile, Japan
was completely opposite with the least hours
of teaching.
Japan
, the country with the least hours
of teaching, have 600 hours
of individual teaching per year in both primary and secondary education, in
upper secondary has a peak than the 2 previous which Change preposition
apply
approximately
610 Add a missing verb
is approximately
hours
of teaching. In Spain, the figures for primary and secondary were the same as in Japan
, for the upper secondary, the data was reached to
1000 Change preposition
apply
hours
, which surprisingly higher compared to the other educations. In Iceland, the hours
that teacher taught in primary
category was the same Add an article
the primary
to
Change preposition
in
Japan
and Spain, secondary and upper secondary received the same figures which 800 hours
each. Last
but not least, the USA have the highest figure, which shows the amount of time that each teacher teaches was enormous, primary education have
about 820 Correct subject-verb agreement
has
hours
, while
secondary and upper secondary have over 1000 hours
, in more detail, secondary have 1050 hours
and upper secondary have 1100 hours
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