The chart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of world
The charts show the
percentage
of Use synonyms
water
used for different purposes including: Industrial Use synonyms
use
, Agricultural Use synonyms
use
and Domestic Use synonyms
use
in 6 areas of the world.
At Use synonyms
first,
we can see that, most of the Linking Words
percentage
was Use synonyms
Use synonyms
use
for Agricultural Change the form of the verb
used
use
in AFRICA, SOUTH Use synonyms
AMERICA
, CENTRAL Use synonyms
ASIA
and SOUTH EAST Use synonyms
ASIA
Use synonyms
while
in NORTH Linking Words
AMERICA
and Use synonyms
EUROPE
most of the Add a comma
,EUROPE
water
was Use synonyms
Use synonyms
use
for Industrial Change the form of the verb
used
use
. And the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
water
was Use synonyms
Use synonyms
use
for Wrong verb form
used
Agricultural
just in the second.
Replace the word
agriculture
While
the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
use
for Industrial in EUROPE and NORTH Use synonyms
AMERICA
Use synonyms
are
higher than Agricultural Change the verb form
is
use
, the Use synonyms
percentage
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
use
Replace the word
used
for
Industrial in 4 other areas Change preposition
by
were
much lower than Change the verb form
was
Change preposition
for Agricultural
Agricultural
. Replace the word
agriculture
For instance
, the Linking Words
percentage
of Industrial Use synonyms
use
was in the second Use synonyms
rank
in SOUTH EAST Use synonyms
ASIA
and was in the lowest Use synonyms
rank
in AFRICA, SOUTH Use synonyms
AMERICA
and CENTRAL Use synonyms
ASIA
.
The Use synonyms
percentage
of Domestic Use synonyms
use
was reaching the lowest Use synonyms
rank
in SOUTH EAST Use synonyms
ASIA
, EUROPE and NORTH Use synonyms
AMERICA
. Use synonyms
While
it was in the second Linking Words
rank
in 3 other areas.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
percentage
was Use synonyms
Use synonyms
use
most is for Agricultural and Industrial.Wrong verb form
used
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, water, use, america, asia, rank with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
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