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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays,
businesses
 usually emphasise in their advertising that their
products
 are new in some way.I believe that it is a positive development.
Businesses
 want to have a better profit from
customers
, so they claim that they have a new change in
products
.One reason is that by advertising,
customers
 who want to renew the old
products
 could be
attracked
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attacked
attracted
 by the advertisement and buy the
products
.Another reason is that there are various
products
 in the market.To have competitiveness,
businesses
 want to have
charasteristic
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characteristic
characteristics
 which could distinguish
from
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them from
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 other
products
.Most
of
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apply
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consumer
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consumers
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 like to choose
the
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a
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 special one
instead
 of a common one at
a
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the
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 same level of price. The basement of emphasising
products
are
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is
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 new in some way
is
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apply
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that the
businesses
 really have something special.So they need to study and develop the
products
which is
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that
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 a
benefit
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 to
customers
.Using the new technology can give
customers
 convenience.
For example
,
NFC
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the NFC
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 function in mobile
phone
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phones
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 can store some
cards
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card
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 information in
phone
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the phone
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 and people do not need to take lots of cars with them which can reduce the burden of commuting.By advertising,
customers
 can choose which new function they want to buy.But there may
have
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be
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 some new technology
is
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that is
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 not useful and
business
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businesses
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 may set a higher price to sell it.But I believe
tgat
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that
customers
 have their own thinking and they can recognize the real useful message from the
exaggurated
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exaggerated
 advertisement.
Although
 there are some misleading advertisements
which
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businesses
 want to treat
consemers
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consumers
, most
of
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apply
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customers
 can identify the advertisement and enjoy the convenience
afford
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afforded
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 by new technology.So advertising
products
 new in some ways is a positive development to promote
businesses
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business
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improving
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improvement
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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