You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar charts compare the proportion of Australian and non-Australian people who have been living in modern
cities
, towns
and rural areas
over the period between 1995 and 2010. Overall
, residents of the cities
formed the highest percentage over the given period, whilst, countryside residents formed the least percentage in this
period, except for the non-Australian peoplein
2010.
Correct your spelling
people in
people
To begin
with, in 1995, most Australians lived in cities
with nearly 50%, while
about 60% of the non-natives lived in urban regions. Rural areas
were densely populated by citizens, approximately 35% for Austarlian
and 40% for people outside Australia. Correct your spelling
Australian
Towns
were the least favourite choice with about 20% of Australian residents and 15% for
citizens outside Australia.
Change preposition
of
On the other hand
, in 2010, the percentage of peoples
who lived in the Fix the agreement mistake
people
cities
increased significantly by 20% for both Australians and non-natives. Towns
and rural areas
also
showed a great decline for
Change preposition
in
Correct article usage
the natives
natives
population where both of them formed about 15%. Whilst the non-natives percentages halved in Change the noun form
native
towns
and showed a huge decrease by
about 10% in rural Change preposition
of
areas
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