The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the different day-to-day activities done by working individuals in two distinct
years
1958 and 2008. Data presented in prsentage.Overall
, it can be seen that in five decades there have been dramatic changes observed in the work and gathering.
In the year
1958, over to quarter of the population was more likely to be seen engaged in work and sleep which was 32 and 33% respectively. However
, this
ratio changed in 50 years
of time and people got more inclined toward work which considered
the highest at 45% of all other activities and the percentage of sleep gt dropped by 12. In 1958, the travelling ratio of individuals was just 2% which increased by 8% in the period 2008. Add a missing verb
is considered
On the other hand
, interest in leisure activities remained constant in both the years
.
In the year
1958, people used to prefer going out for family and friend meetings which was 19%, however
, it reduced considerably in the year
2008 and fell to 6%. percentage of relaxation had escalate
in subsequent Change the verb form
escalated
years
which was reportedat
8% in 1958 and increased up to 13 % in the Correct your spelling
reported at
year
2008.Submitted by joshiami7570 on
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