the graphs show basic information about employment
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of employment for males and females from different countries in 10 years
Overall
, male in 2005 was the highest percentage while
female in 1995 was the lowest in all country
To begin
in Australia the number of employed males in 1995 was 56% and females was 27%, after 10 years, it has increased to 69% and 39%. New Zealand is pretty similar to Australia when it had 60% of male employment and 26% of female employment in 1995 then
in 2005 was 71% and 41%. Switzerland has 65% male and 57% female inSubmitted by trung642k6 on
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