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Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gym and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in so doing. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Today many
companies
 try to give their employees a break to play a sport in common countries and there are many managers who think that helps employees to stay in a better mood and
work
 effectively,
while
 others have a contrary opinion,In
this
 essay , I will discuss both views. As we know sport is very important every day in
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the
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life , whomever some people
work
 for long hours in most of the
companies
 , that could influence their focus for that reason nowadays some
manufacturer
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manufacturers
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 give their workers time to do some sports ,for, example Google
companies
 it has a lot of clubs' in said works ,
Also
, we can observe that in a lot of chain communions that help people to create better ways of
work
. On another hand, some managers think that could waste the time of workers, as the results are in production,
Moreover
 , they need places in the company and most of them are too crowded ,
Additionally
,the gyms need equipment that
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companies
 a lot of money . In conclusion ,I strongly with the opinion that it gives workers relaxing time to do sports and other activities to be more concentrated in
work
 to create and like what they are doing.
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