the graphs show basic information about employment

the graphs show basic information about employment
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The provided bar chart depicts the comparison of the rate of blue-collar workers, males and females in six different countries between 1995 and 2005. Upon initial observation, it is evident that in Australia, Iceland and New Zealand male hiring noticeably differs from female in both years.
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what is given, we can see that
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overall
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the overall
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sum of
the
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male employment is predominantly higher than female, especially in Iceland, where the number
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for 70 per
cent
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in1995 and
reaches
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reached
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just over 80 per
cent
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in 2005.
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, Switzerland and
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the UK
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always had
an
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approximate
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equal numbers with just a 7-8 per
cent
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of
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dissimilarity. Notwithstanding,
USA
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the USA
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had a completely divergent modification in data, where
woman's
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women's
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rate rose up to 20 per
cent
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, simultaneously,
male's
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male
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statistics developed only half of the growth of females, by 10 per
cent
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from 60 to 70%.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment sectors
  • economic cycles
  • recessions
  • booms
  • demographic groups
  • qualifications
  • employability
  • globalization
  • outsourcing
  • multilingual
  • remote work
  • freelance
  • technological advancements
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