the graphs show basic information about employment
The provided bar chart depicts the comparison of the rate of blue-collar workers, males and females in six different countries between 1995 and 2005.
Upon initial observation, it is evident that in Australia, Iceland and New Zealand male hiring noticeably differs from female in both years.
According to
what is given, we can see that overall
sum of Correct article usage
the overall
the
male employment is predominantly higher than female, especially in Iceland, where the number Correct article usage
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account
for 70 per Change the verb form
accounts
cent
in1995 and reaches
just over 80 per Wrong verb form
reached
cent
in 2005. On the contrary
, Switzerland and UK
always had Correct article usage
the UK
an
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apply
approximate
equal numbers with just a 7-8 per Change the word
approximately
cent
of
dissimilarity. Notwithstanding, Change preposition
apply
USA
had a completely divergent modification in data, where Correct article usage
the USA
woman's
rate rose up to 20 per Fix the agreement mistake
women's
cent
, simultaneously, male's
statistics developed only half of the growth of females, by 10 per Change noun form
male
cent
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