The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs describe the working time that adults spent on different activities in a country in 1958 and 2008.
This
essay will note some significant features and compare them when necessary.
Overall
, there are six different categories of interest that are marked by distinguished textures in two pie charts. The unit that is
used is in percentage.
To start with, there are activities that are less favourable as time went by. The number of people who went out and worked outside was falling from 1958 to 2008, decreasing 7% of the initial value. Moreover
, the duration spent on vacation and holiday with their families and friends were plunging from 19 to 6%.
Meanwhile, there are two deeds that tended to be done more in 2008. The mass of the country had more time to relax and take a break, increasing from 8 to 13%. In addition
, going outside to work added up to 6% of its beginning value, climbing from 2 to 8%Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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