Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities.

It is hard to imagine modern life in big cities without the use of transport.
Therefore
, the
number
of transport users is higher than the
number
of
traffic
issues. Let us
firstly
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consider problems that can be solved by spending public money. We can see the lack of
roads
,
for example
, in the centre of my home town, Saratov, where
are
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there are
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always
traffic
jams in the morning. It happens because the
number
of car owners has increased in recent decades,
while
the
number
of
roads
has remained the same. If the government spends more money on building new
roads
,
this
kind of problem can be avoided. There is
also
a significant
number
of
roads
that are unusable, many
roads
are old and in poor condition.
Also
,
this
trouble can be solved by spending taxes. but there could be human error issues.
Furthermore
, drivers sometimes have
a bad habits
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a bad habit
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,
such
as
traffic
offence
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offences
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.
For example
, using
the
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speed
that is
not allowed on some
roads
,
this
option can
finally
lead to rapid deterioration of
roads
. Sometimes, car owners or public transport drivers put away some dangerous rubbish in their windows,
such
as
the
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cigarette butt, which is
also
can be a potential fire risk, several of these fire catastrophes have already occurred because of
this
breach.
This
issue can be solved by issuing heavy fines to offenders. In conclusion,
traffic
congestion is the real problem, which includes different factors and can
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actually be avoided with new rules or spending public money
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