The diagram blow shows how rain water is collected and converted to drinking water in an Australian town. Write a report for university lecturer.
This
linear chart illustrates the method of
, that Change preposition
apply
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is use
use
to produce fresh Replace the word
used
water
from the
Correct article usage
apply
rain
Correct your spelling
rainwater
water
in Australian
Add an article
the Australian
an Australian
city
. Fix the agreement mistake
cities
Overall
, four major steps included
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were included
into
the process, which started from collecting Change preposition
in
rain
Correct your spelling
rainwater
water
untill
pumping fresh Correct your spelling
until
water
to
the houses.
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into
Initially
, tanks
are
located near the houses, which Wrong verb form
were
use
for collecting rain Wrong verb form
were used
water
, that falling
on the roof of the house. After that, the Wrong verb form
fell
water
, which is in the tanks
are
Unnecessary verb
apply
being
drained through the Wrong verb form
is
water
filter using tubes, which have been fixed bottem
of the three Correct your spelling
bottom
tanks
. In the next step, filtered water
is stored in the water
storage which located
next to the filter. Add a missing verb
is located
Then
this
water
suppose
to be sent to Wrong verb form
is supposed
the
another tank, which is placed left side next to the storage, Remove the article
apply
for
to add chemicals Change preposition
apply
as
Change preposition
for
water
treatment through pipe
that Add an article
a pipe
the pipe
interconnected
on the bottom sides of Add a missing verb
is interconnected
the
both Remove the article
apply
tanks
. However
, after adding chemicals from the lid, which fixed
on the top of the Add a missing verb
was fixed
water
treatment tank, clean water
distributed
to the houses through tubes, which Add a missing verb
was distributed
connected
to the residents from Add a missing verb
were connected
second
tank.Change the article
the second
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