The diagram blow shows how rain water is collected and converted to drinking water in an Australian town. Write a report for university lecturer.

The diagram blow shows how rain water is collected and converted to drinking water in an Australian town. Write a report for university lecturer.
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This
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linear chart illustrates the method
of
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, that
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is use
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use
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to produce fresh
water
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from
the
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apply
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rain
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rainwater
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water
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in
Australian
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the Australian
an Australian
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city
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cities
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.
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, four major steps
included
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were included
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into
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in
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the process, which started from collecting
rain
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rainwater
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water
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untill
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until
pumping fresh
water
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to
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into
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the houses.
Initially
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,
tanks
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are
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were
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located near the houses, which
use
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were used
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for collecting rain
water
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, that
falling
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fell
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on the roof of the house. After that, the
water
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, which is in the
tanks
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are
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being
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is
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drained through the
water
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filter using tubes, which have been fixed
bottem
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bottom
of the three
tanks
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. In the next step, filtered
water
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is stored in the
water
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storage which
located
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next to the filter.
Then
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this
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water
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suppose
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is supposed
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to be sent to
the
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another tank, which is placed left side next to the storage,
for
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to add chemicals
as
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for
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water
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treatment through
pipe
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a pipe
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that
interconnected
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is interconnected
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on the bottom sides of
the
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apply
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both
tanks
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.
However
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, after adding chemicals from the lid, which
fixed
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was fixed
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on the top of the
water
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treatment tank, clean
water
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distributed
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was distributed
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to the houses through tubes, which
connected
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were connected
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to the residents from
second
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the second
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tank.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, tanks with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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