The map illustrates the difference between the present and predicted future Islip town centre.
The pictures describe the difference between the present and the future Islip town centre.
This
writing will give important features and compare them when necessary.
Overall
, there are two different maps that indicate the existing and the predicted layout of the town centre. There are some features that are going to be repositioned and some that are new.
To start with, the main road that cuts between shops is going to be used for pedestrians only and cars are not able to go through. Moreover
, the dead end in front of the school is extended to connect to the new main road, causing the old park to be relocated to the side of the way.
In addition
, there are also
some new facilities that are added to the city, such
as a bus station, shopping place, car park, and new housing that will be built across the old shop in the north. Besides
, there is another highway that will be constructed, encircling the city centre.Submitted by twiggseducationbdg on
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