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Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email •recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn •explain how your friend could learn this sport • suggest that you both learn this sport together. Write at leasr 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin you letter as follows: Dear ...............,

#friend #lives #town #advice #sport #email #•recommend #•explain #leasr #addresses
Dear Parth, Hope you are doing well! As you asked, I'm going to give you my recommendation regarding a new sport called football that you would not only love to learn but
also
 can meet your goal of improving your physical strength. I assume you might not be aware that a recreational centre has recently opened in our hometown. The fun fact is that it
also
 has a football field to play at any time, and has an English-speaking tutor to teach
this
 new sport to the beginners. I think you should really participate in the beginner-level training sessions as the trainer can guide you in the English language as well. Actually, if you are willing to take these classes, I can join you as well! Even though we need entry passes for these learning courses, it would be cheaper to enrol in them together. So, what's your thought about
this
 game? Your friend, Harpal
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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