You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to: • explain the reason why you decline the offer • express your gratitude • explain why you like your current job very much

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter about the job position of Landscape Designer being offered by your organization. I am grateful that you have taken out time to review my portfolio. Unfortunately, I cannot accept

this

offer. Your organization is

well reputed

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and has a lot of goodwill in the market. I am

gratefull

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grateful

that you have taken out time to view and select my online portfolio. I was truly overwhelmed when I

had

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received the appointment letter.

However

, I regret to inform

that

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you that

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I cannot join your organization as I find my current job role more suitable and have work commitments. To sum it up, I am happy and content with my current job role and responsibilities.

Beside

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, I

also

have

handful

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a handful

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of ongoing projects that need to be accomplished on

priority

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a priority

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basis. These projects will definitely

will

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apply

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enhance my portfolio in

near

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the near

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future. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Marc Jacob.

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