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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#education #people
Studying has become more easy as it is available in many forms
such
 as learning in schools or
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learning
 from home. Some people believe that online
education
 is more advantageous
while
 others
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argue
 that traditional
education
 is far better and can never be replaced. In my
opinion
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 Online
education
 can bring more
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advancement
 to
students
 so it should be promoted. On the one hand, advancement in technology brings
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 to many difficult tasks, learning from a source that has everything available on
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 of
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 can be more beneficial. There are many advantages of
stuying
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studying
staying
 online as it becomes more
convinent
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convenient
 for some
students
 to learn it by themselves. Some
students
 are fond of knowing detailed
things
which
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 can be only available on
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the internet
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internet
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 so it takes very
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 time to get into that information without wasting much time in searching
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 in a book. Many online platforms have study material from
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particular
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field
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.
However
, in some
cases
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students
 are made to study online if there are any serious
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crises
crimes
 or emergencies in some
country
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countries
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.
For instance
, several countries had faced medical
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 named
Covid-19
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 which caused major
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problems
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 in countries where there was a total lockdown for many
month
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months
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 which affected
students
 in many ways
where
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and
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 online
education
 helped the
students
 a lot.
On the other hand
, there are many people
that
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who
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 believe traditional learning methods are more essential and can never be replaced. Some
students
 are not capable of learning
things
 from just seeing it, they need personal attention to get it known.
In addition
, there are some
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files
fields
 that need practical training which is not possible online so
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needs
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hand on
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 exposure which requires
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traditional
 methods.
Furthermore
, teachers have
ability
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the ability
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 to make
students
 understand the concepts in different ways that are easy for
students
 to get through which is not possible to get from online lectures. To illustrate, there are many mathematical tricks that only teachers have, they know how a student can easily remember it,
teachers
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 make their
students
 learn
such
 tricks with ease and can make them remember
lifetime
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. In recapitulation, It depends on individual
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students
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 how they are comfortable in learning
things
,
some
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 lessons can be easily learned from
internet
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the internet
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 or online
platform
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platforms
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while
 some tasks can be achieved by learning from
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 person, it totally depends on how a person can grasp
things
. I believe learning online can be more beneficial as the advanced technology
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power
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 to make everything possible.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-Learning
  • face-to-face education
  • remote learning
  • virtual classroom
  • webinar
  • digital platform
  • self-paced learning
  • interactive learning
  • course accessibility
  • academic networking
  • pedagogy
  • synchronous/asynchronous sessions
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • edtech (educational technology)
  • holistic development
  • practical skills
  • collaborative learning
  • digital divide
  • curriculum adaptation
  • technological literacy
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