You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Mr. John Pitt, I am writing to express my interest
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in our head office in London in deputation for six months. I have been working in our institution for
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five years. During
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best employee of the organisation. I have been going through
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time in my life after I lost Jennifer, my girlfriend, in an accident
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I would like to stay with my mother in England for some time.
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in our head office for six months. I will complete my ongoing project
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of
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I have discussed
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him
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the timeline, and he is ready to accommodate my work. I am requesting your help to discuss the matter with the director to get approval. As you have been working in the head office for several years your advice will help me adapt more easily to the new workplace. I look forward to hearing from you, Yours sincerely, May Aann
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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  • therefore
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  • although
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  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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