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In recent times, stress has emerged to be the major challenge faced by people nowadays. What are the causes of this problem? Suggest some effective solutions for the same.

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In
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stress
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very
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 common problem among all
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individuals. Nowadays,
Anxiety
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 is the major difficulty faced by the
people
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 . There are numerous
reasons
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 associated with
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 an impediment, and several measures can be considered to solve it. The following article will discuss the same before formulating a final verdict.
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, there are several
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 associated with
stress
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. Particularly, everyone has a hectic schedule as they are busy
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 their work which creates a workload on the
people
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.
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, financial problems
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 cause
anxiety
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.
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,
people
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 want to fulfill the needs of their family and they want to earn more and more money and it
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 causes tension.
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, some person has difficulty in
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 management and they have no free
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rest and
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 creates
stress
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 ,leads to several health problems.
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, these all are the
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of
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stress
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.
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, several measures can be taken into account to reduce
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 of the
people
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likewise
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,
people
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 do meditation and
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 do exercise.
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, individuals have to join yoga classes to get relief from
stress
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, they
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 have a need to manage their
time
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 or make a timetable and do work
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.
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,
people
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 should involve themselves in those activities which give peace and calm to their minds.
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, these are the measures to solve the problem of
anxiety
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.
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, having discussed the topic at length, in my opinion,
these
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 are several
reasons
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of
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stress
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for instance
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,
time
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work
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and work
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 pressure;
however
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, we can solve
this
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 problem by doing yoga and meditation.
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