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Fewer students are studying science at school and university, favouring more computer based subjects instead. Is this a positive or negative development? What are the reasons for this?

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With the ever-increasing demand for information technology, a minority of
students
 choose to study science at school and university,
while
in
contrast
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 more
students
 prefer computer-based subjects. Because of
this
 development every year fewer doctors and engineers are launched in the market which creates negative development. The reason for
this
 happening will be discussed in the following paragraphs. As more and more
students
 are following the trend of studying computer technology, adolescents admitted to science subject are decreasing.
Due to
this
 change, our country might experience a shortage of nurses, doctors and engineers in the fields.
This
 will have a direct impact on the nation's healthcare system and infrastructure.
Additionally
, Going through a lack of staff can often lead to expensive treatments and skyrocketing housing prices, leading to
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a burden on middle-class people who are not only able to build a dream house for themselves but
also
 afford medical care for their loved ones. Some of the major reasons why many teenagers are opting for
computer-based
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 subject is the higher remuneration packages and the convenience it has to offer.
Due to
 the advancement of technology, nowadays occupations relating to IT services provide an option to
work
 from home to their employees. Considering the fact who do not like to get paid to
work
 in our comfortable space than working in a venture
such
 as physicians who have to
work
 even night shifts in the hospital.
Furthermore
, enjoying the comforts of working virtually anywhere in the world, these workers often pay off a large sum of money, which other jobs
such
 as architecture can not reap
this
 benefits. In conclusion, having handsome amount of salaries and flexible working conditions attract
students
 to get admission into tech fields
instead
 of science, resulting shortage of staff in the country and increasing fees for utilization of those amenities. I believe the government should provide captivating incentives to employees who
work
 on their feet 24/7
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