General IELTS Task1: your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email -Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn -Explain how your friend could learn this sport -Suggest that you both learn this sport together Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…,

Dear Kevin, Hello Kevin. Even if It has not been ages since we

last

met, I hope you’re doing well. It’s great to hear that you’ve planned to give a new sport a try. In the town, people can easily find a couple of sports clubs, which most of them have been introduced recently. One type of

sport

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activity that I highly recommend you to take part in is

a

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scuba diving. Once you said, you had a dream of travelling

to

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beneath

of

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the ocean. For that reason,

this

sport would be an excellent choice to make your dream come true, I do believe.

Although

, our town isn’t located

nearby

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the ocean, but the sea we have, as you know. In

this

club, all

trainers

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are

so

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qualified in their field and are willing to help people

how

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to wear all

necessary

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apparatuses properly.

Moreover

, they can

be dive

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into

water

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together with

participants at the initial stage of the course. So, there’s no worry to think over being sunk whatsoever.

if

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you have not decided who to go with yet, I would be very glad

of being

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your partner there. Since I have a great passion

to capture

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for capturing

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picturesque views

by

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with

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my camera, I believe that taking photos underwater should give an extra taste to my personal photo album. How wonderful it might be

taking

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a new

acitivity

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activity

up with your friend

as well as

your liked one

simultenously

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simultaneously

. That’s all I can think of for now

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but definitely get back to me if I’ve missed something. Take care. Timur