Some workers must work at night. What are the advantages and disadvantages of night-shift work? Give reasons and examples to support your opinion.

It is known that the world does not stop and work is developed day and
night
, 24 hours per day, 7 days a week. For people who work
night
shifts
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there are some advantages and disadvantages that are worth the risk of taking the job. In
this
essay
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I will discuss the pros and cons of working at
night
,
however
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to what extent?
To begin
with the advantages of a
night
shift, we have the possibility of days free where we can resolve all of our stuff without stress because we have
time
to do it.
Moreover
, money will not be a problem
as a result
of the extra bonus.
This
type of job is not for everyone
due to
some complications that can appear as
season
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passes.
Therefore
, the disadvantages of going against the grain become highly remarkable when we realize that family
time
starts to be a sacrifice
in
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consequence
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of our sleep.
In addition
,
althought
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although
I had
tell
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that we have more
time
to "resolve our stuff",
that
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necessity to take a nap at least for
few
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hours is urgent after leaving the workstation. So,
while
we get more money despite less
time
with family, we develop health problems too, like high blood pressure
due to
stress, even though we do not notice it. In brief,
this
essay showed that quality of life exists when you ignore that it has an expiration date too. Having much money and availability to go out
while
the sun is out, is good.
On the other hand
, there will be a
time
you will pay for it with your health and your family. Personally, I am a nurse and sometimes I do not have the choice to work day-shift but I do not look at
night
shifts as a monster, I face it as an experience and a chance of a change in atmosphere that will not
last
forever.
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