WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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my

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ever concern. Based on the given data, I would like to illustrate the following points: Norway

,

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was ranked number 1 Not only, in the

employment

rate

but

also

, on the average

income

with the highest

income

for individuals.

However

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the gap is not big between Norway and Austria in the

employment

rate

we

could

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observe clearly the huge difference in the individual's average

income

which

even

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not became on the 2nd ranking, The lowest

Employment

rate

was in Greece

however

, It's not the same position

while

comparing the average

income

per individual that's mean in

majority

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the majority

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of cases there are some relations between the

Employment

rate

and the average

income

for each local person

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still there are some exceptions for the rule. but no one can deny the clear relation between the

employment

rate

and

the

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income

as the higher average

income

for

individual

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an individual

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is more likely linked with the countries with higher

employment

rate

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.