The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.
The line graph illustrates, the amount of
visitors
to a museum in the UK in two seasons (
summer
and winter) in 2003.
Overall
, the
number
of
visitors
in
summer
is more than in winter.
Furthermore
,
visitors
prefer visiting the museum between 9:00 am and 12:00 pm, and
this
amount decreased after the mid-day. Regarding the
number
of
visitors
in
summer
, it began at 9:00 a.m. and climbed rapidly to around 1300
visitors
at 10:00 a.m. Between 10:00 am and 12:00 pm, there is a slight increase in the
number
of
visitors
at around 1500, which is the highest amount in
summer
, before falling gradually after 12:00 pm to 16:00 pm,
then
drop dramatically before closing at 18:00 pm.
On the other hand
, the
number
of
visitors
in winter fluctuated at around 450 to 550
visitors
from 9:00 am to almost 11:30 am.
This
figure, decreased from 12:00 pm to 14:30 pm
then
remain stable to 18:00 pm.
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