You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The provided picture illustrates the detailed process of making a
water
filter which is called a water
filter assembly and changing the dirty water
into drinkable water
.
To begin
with, the water
filter assembly consists of 2 tanks. While
one of them cleans the normal water
called the above storage
drum, the other is a storage
drum and these are connected to each other with a pipe. Also
, all mechanisms are made of plastic. In order to make the above storage
drum, it is needed to have sand, charcoal, gravel and a plastic lid. First,
the water
is added into
the above Change preposition
to
storage
drum. There are three stages of filtering water
which are sand, charcoal and gravel, respectively. After the water
passes through the three stages it is poured into the storage
drum with a pipe. When there is enough of
Change preposition
apply
water
in the storage
drum, you can have your filtered drinking water
. It is clean and ready to drink thanks to a tap.Submitted by ece.ozge on
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