You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The provided picture illustrates the detailed process of making a
water
filter which is called a
water
filter assembly and changing the dirty
water
into drinkable
water
.
To begin
with, the
water
filter assembly consists of 2 tanks.
While
one of them cleans the normal
water
called the above
storage
drum, the other is a
storage
drum and these are connected to each other with a pipe.
Also
, all mechanisms are made of plastic. In order to make the above
storage
drum, it is needed to have sand, charcoal, gravel and a plastic lid.
First,
the
water
is added
into
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the above
storage
drum. There are three stages of filtering
water
which are sand, charcoal and gravel, respectively. After the
water
passes through the three stages it is poured into the
storage
drum with a pipe. When there is enough
of
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water
in the
storage
drum, you can have your filtered drinking
water
. It is clean and ready to drink thanks to a tap.
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