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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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Nowadays the great majority of women tend to choose a career path rather than looking after their children, which causes crimes among
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 generation.
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 option of taking care of kids can be right in some cases, I completely support women, who
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 in order to achieve various purposes. Let us start by looking at the advantages of building a career for females.
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, today they have the same position as men,
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 modern development is not possible without them.
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, a lot of things were created by ladies as well many researches were completed. Marie Curie discovered radium and was the first person with a Nobel prize in two different sciences. Josephine Cochrane invented the washing machine, which makes our
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 easier. So, why should they stay at home and do nothing? Turning to another point it is obvious, that with the help of the wife, the family can afford more things.
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 are more wealthy. Maybe it is arduous for wives to
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, do housework and prepare dinner at the same time, but they will be sure, that with the help of their salary, kids will be in good condition.
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, children can look at the example of their mothers and try to develop themselves. If we look at unsuccessful housewives, we are unlikely to have an impetus to learn. Taking everything into consideration, I would say that it is better for females to
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 financial stability and an opportunity to make something crucial
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 their lives
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • evolution
  • domestic roles
  • diverse professional engagements
  • dual-working parents
  • family dynamics
  • juvenile delinquency
  • societal and economic factors
  • dual-income households
  • childcare methods
  • community support systems
  • gender roles
  • family responsibilities
  • professional aspirations
  • development needs
  • correlation
  • simplistic causation
  • workplace policies
  • flexible hours
  • parental leave
  • gender equality
  • role models
  • successful womanhood
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