IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.

IELTS WRITING Task 1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists who visited Brighton attractions in England from 1980 to 2010.
The line graph provides information about the percentages of travellers who went to Brighton Monuments in England between 1980 from 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the most visited attraction was the pavilion,
whereas
the less attractive was the art gallery. In 1980, the figure for the festival had a steady transaction during the period at 30%,
while
the proportion of the pavilion was low amount from the festival and it started to rise until 1985 ,
then
it fluctuated until 2000 and continued to flow down until 2010 with around 35%. To continue, the art gallery from the beginning fluctuated with a peak at 38% in 1985 and
then
it started to have a downward trend and stopped in 2010 at 10%. And the
last
one is the pier with a fluctuating trend until 2000 and after it started to rise to around 20%. In 2010, the highest figure was the pavilion with number of percentage 33% and the lowest was the art gallery with approximately 5%.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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