​​The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries: China and India. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

​​The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries: China and India. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts represent the percentage of consumption of different
food
categories in 2008 on a global scale, and it is compared with China and India.
Overall
, processed
food
, vegetables and fruits were the highest primary and secondary sources of consumption for all of them. Animal
food
, and nuts and seeds covered the remaining fraction.
Firstly
, for artificial foods, the numbers were 41%, 34% and 39% for the World, China and the Asian continent, and it covered the largest area.
Moreover
, the second highest one includes vegetables and fruits with 29%, 32% and 23% for the same previously mentioned list of nations.
Lastly
, for animal
food
, the figures for the globe and India were almost identical, with 26% , 27% and 15% for the other remaining countries.
Finally
, nuts and seeds held the least weight on the macro scale with 4%, and for the other mentioned countries it was between 10-20%.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average consumption
  • Global composition
  • Food category
  • Meat, vegetables, fruits, grains
  • Percentage, proportion
  • Comparative analysis
  • Similarities and differences
  • Intake, consumption patterns
  • Striking differences
  • Notable similarities
  • Higher/lower consumption
  • Significant difference
  • Proportionate share
  • Relevant comparison
  • General trend
  • Insight
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