The graph below shows the unemployment in the USA and Japan.

The graph below shows the unemployment in the USA and Japan.
The graph illustrates information about the percentage of people who were not employed in courtiers the
USA
and
Japan
in the period between
March
1993 and
March
1999.
Overall
, the rate of
Japan
was very low at the start of
March
1993 with just slightly over 2 per
cent
. In comparison, The
USA
had a magnificent high proportion of unemployment with 7 per
cent
in the same period. The percentage of people who didn’t work in
Japan
was constantly and steadily increasing with a small drop in
March
1996 from 3.5 per
cent
to nearly 3 per
cent
, but after that, the rate continued to rise. In
March
1999 the unemployment reached a peak of over 4.5 per
cent
. Opposite to
Japan
, the
USA
rates started with a high level of unemployment, but it smoothly decreased from
March
1993 from 7 per
cent
to just over 4 per
cent
. The rates of the
USA
and
Japan
were in the same position in the period between 1998 and 1999 with 4.5 per
cent
in both countries.
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