The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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to show us how much CO2 was released by people in different parts of the world.

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Kingdom has the most

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in each year.

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sharp increase in 1977.

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in Italy and Portugal

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, they have never reached out

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, we can see decreasing the CO2

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1977. After that, it was reached to Portugal's

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in 2007. By comparing these trends we can find out, Britain had the most pollution among these countries.

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, Portugal had the least one. Swedish people were trying hard to reduce the amount of Carbon dioxide

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after 1977. But in

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we can see the amount of CO2

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increased. In General, it seems

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people and their government did not have any solutions for dwindling the CO2

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had the solution and reduced

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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163 words

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