The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
figure try
to show us how much CO2 was released by people in different parts of the world.
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tries
According to
the graph, United
Kingdom has the most Correct article usage
the United
emissions
in each year. Furthermore
, Sweden had had
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apply
the
sharp increase in 1977. Correct article usage
a
Moreover
, we have sparsely
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sparse
emissions
in Italy and Portugal however
, they have never reached out Britain
. Change preposition
to Britain
Also
, we can see decreasing the CO2 emissions
in sweden
after Change the capitalization
Sweden
in
1977. After that, it was reached to Portugal's Change preposition
apply
emissions
in 2007.
By comparing these trends we can find out, Britain had the most pollution among these countries. On the other hand
, Portugal had the least one. Swedish people were trying hard to reduce the amount of Carbon dioxide emissions
after 1977. But in Italy
we can see the amount of CO2 Add a comma
,Italy
emissions
were
increased.
In General, it seems Unnecessary verb
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Italian
people and their government did not have any solutions for dwindling the CO2 Correct article usage
the Italian
emissions
. However
, United
Kingdom Correct article usage
the United
have
had the solution and reduced Change the verb form
has
their
suitably.Correct the word
theirs
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