The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This

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to show us how much CO2 was released by people in different parts of the world.

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the graph,

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Kingdom has the most

emissions

in each year.

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, Sweden had

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sharp increase in 1977.

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, we have

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emissions

in Italy and Portugal

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, they have never reached out

Britain

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to Britain

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Also

, we can see decreasing the CO2

emissions

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1977. After that, it was reached to Portugal's

emissions

in 2007. By comparing these trends we can find out, Britain had the most pollution among these countries.

On the other hand

, Portugal had the least one. Swedish people were trying hard to reduce the amount of Carbon dioxide

emissions

after 1977. But in

Italy

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we can see the amount of CO2

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increased. In General, it seems

Italian

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the Italian

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people and their government did not have any solutions for dwindling the CO2

emissions

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Kingdom

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had the solution and reduced

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suitably.

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