Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in arts

It is indeed true that

arts

play a vital role for cultures

whereas

a lot of people turn out from

arts

and they focus on academic

subjects

such

as science, technology and business. They think that it would help their

future

but the

government

should do something

on

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arts

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because the

arts

can carry a culture. At present, most of the people choose crucial

subjects

such

as science, business and technology rather than

arts

. There

are

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some

reason

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behind it,

firstly

, the thing if they want to do something best for their career

than

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academic

subjects

is one of the best

choose

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where

arts

is

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not

best

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option for their

future

.

Secondly

, pressuring their parents and society nowadays most of the people think that

arts

is

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not considerable for their children's

future

rather than if they focus on their academic

subjects

they will do better in their

future

.

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,

according to

recent

data

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80% of a student choose the academic subject after their college graduation in Bangladesh. Perhaps they try to follow a common trend or it is their family pressure. Increasing awareness among the younger generation by the

government

is the best solution to increase interest in the

arts

. Encouraging artists with a higher paycheck or increasing the job market

potentiality

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by the

government

will help to resolve

this

issue. The recent world-class exhibition in Paris has elevated many artists,

for instance

, one of my friends

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Madhav Vodnala a renowned painter has been awarded a memento as a token of recognition. That recognition not only helped him to start an online coaching centre to educate many other children but

also

to earn money for his survival

To conclude

, it is not possible to solve

this

problem for a person. Everyone should come forward for it and

government

also

should invest

to

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the sector