Improvements in health, education, and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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should help poor

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the development process because it is

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who are developed.

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transportation

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the living standard of the population. If

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food

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the health and age of the people will

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automatic

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increase

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can easily and can grow fast.

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is the key factor in the growth of the

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, rich countries should

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support

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poor countries by

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things like

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, books, knowledge and transportation

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instant, if a

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like the USA

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a poor

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like Nepal by giving

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it becomes easy for

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to develop like another

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which are growing fast

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responsibility to help poor

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needed. Rich

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can help poor

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schooling

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country

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countries

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can use

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which are made in poor

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country

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which can help poor

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countries

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too.

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, the above information

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about

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benefits

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country

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will help

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imporoving

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improving

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and trade

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it can easily develop.

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is the

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responsibility

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to help the poor

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Topic Vocabulary:

underdeveloped nations
economic disparity
global cooperation
moral obligation
historical exploitation
interconnected world
economic stability
quality of life
trade relationships
humanitarian aid
capacity building
dependency syndrome
sustainable development
bilateral agreements
economic priorities

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Improvements in health, education, and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

school children are becoming far too dependent on computers. this is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. teacher need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all cost and go back to teaching basic study skills. do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skills more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.

Due to the influence of worldwide media such as television and computers, the gap between cultures is decreasing. The introduction of this global culture is a great benefit to the world. To what extent do you agree with this viewpoint?

Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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