Improvements in health, education, and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I strongly agree

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rich

nation

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nations

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should help poor

nation

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nations

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the development process because it is

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the

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responsibility of

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those

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nation

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nations

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who are developed.

Imporvements

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Improvements

in lifestyle, knowledge,

food

and

transportion

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transportation

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very important for

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very

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country

so government should first focus on that things

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to other things.

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, if the health of the state

will be

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good

than

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can focus on school

education

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work for more hours

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apply

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which

improve

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the living standard of the population. If

facilities

food

will improve

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then

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the health and age of the people will

automatice

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automatic

incerase

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increase

by which

country

can easily and can grow fast.

Education

is the key factor in the growth of the

country

However

, rich countries should

also

support

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poor countries by

give

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things like

cloths

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clothes

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food

, books, knowledge and transportation

facilities

. For

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instant, if a

country

like the USA

help

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a poor

contry

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country

like Nepal by giving

education

then

it becomes easy for

nepal

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to develop like another

countrycountry

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country country

. On the other side

country

which are growing fast

its there

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responsibility to help poor

country

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countries

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and provide the

facilities

which

there

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are

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needed. Rich

country

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countries

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can help poor

country

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countries

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with

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schooling

facilities

and

food

facilities

. Rich

country

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countries

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can use

good

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goods

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which are made in poor

country

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countries

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which can help poor

contry

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countries

to grow even should help in

another ways

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another way

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too.

To conclude

, the above information

describe

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about

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the

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benefits

about

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rich

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a rich

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country

will help

poor

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the poor

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country

as well as

imporoving

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improving

health,

education

and trade

than

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then

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it can easily develop.

Hence

this

is the

responisbity

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responsibility

of the rich

country

to help the poor

country

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